D is for Damon
Damon is the second soul, or character, in my Ancient Greek lifetime, and he also happens to be Apollo's love interest (and for those who are curious, homosexual male relationships - usually between an older and a younger man - were actually very common in Ancient Greece; Apollo himself had a large number of male lovers.)
Damon isn't the sort of guy you'd expect a god - much less the god of music, medicine, truth, and light, among other things - to fall in love with: he's a shepherd, living in near-isolation for most of the year with his father in a tiny hut on a remote mountain, and he spends his days tending their flock of sheep. As a result, he's poor, uneducated, and naive...but he's also determined. Add that to the beauty he grows into as he reaches the edges of manhood, and you have an excellent recipe for disrupting Apollo's self-imposed celibacy.
Here's a little snippet about Damon:
Damon was only seven years old, a dark-eyed slip of a boy with knees like bruised fruit, and hollow cheeks only a mother could love, when he decided he would one day become Apollo’s favorite consort. The fact that he had no mother to love the confusion of limbs and scrapes that were his mortal frame did not deter him; nor did the fact that the god had foresworn all mortal lovers since the untimely deaths of his most recent seventeen in a row, the last of which had died in the god’s arms, cross-eyed and bloodied, after being struck in the head by a rebounding discus. As a result of this unfortunate series of violent and sudden losses, Apollo was so consumed by grief that not even the most smooth-skinned, well-endowed lads and maidens of the realm could shift his resolved celibacy. Damon, however, was a determined child; he’d found very early on in his quiet life that achieving a goal was simply a matter of doing it.He lived with his father in a tiny cottage, barely more than a hut, on an isolated hilltop hours outside the nearest village, tending his father’s sheep and dreaming of the gods who lived high on the remote, misted blue peak that loomed at the very edge of his vision...
Great peek into Damon's story, Liz! Your writing is full of great images. I especially loved the reference to his knees. Well done!!
ReplyDeleteTotally agree with Ava about the imagery in your writing! These snippets are definitely making me anxious to read more.
ReplyDeleteDamon certainly is an interesting character. Your snippet makes me want to learn more about him.
ReplyDeleteSounds intriguing! I'm enjoying getting to know your characters.
ReplyDeleteVery cool. I've seen that name pop up in a few places, but I like your take on it. :)
ReplyDeleteI love Damon's determination. I actually felt a bit of sorrow for him in the beginning of the passage. Well written!
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"knees like bruised fruit" - love that description! Thanks for sharing. New follower here. I'm stopping by from the "A to Z" challenge, and I look forward to visiting again.
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Love Greek mythology it's so haunting and filled with a mixture of wonderful images,....makes the imagination just wonder off.
ReplyDeleteI love the description of an innocent, uneducated peasant boy. You bring the descriptions to life.
ReplyDeleteOkay, so...Damon sounds like he is going to give Apollo a run for his money, honey! Ain't nothing like a character with a well-defined goal. Whoo!
ReplyDeleteExcellent snippet--can't wait to read more! :)
ReplyDeleteYikes! You should have just called this post "Determination." =)
ReplyDeleteI love the "knees like bruised fruit." What a great image.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful description, such vivid imagery!
ReplyDelete"...a boy with knees like bruised fruit"
ReplyDeleteThat's a fantastic description!
Have to admit I'm a little uncomfortable about the boy love, but...nice that you're posting about your work. Me too :)
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Interesting character and I love his name.
ReplyDeleteLove your descriptions here! So wonderfully rich!
ReplyDeleteFascinating. Those gods and goddesses certainly knew how to bend the rules.
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